Ray Lewisby ~justinsdrawings

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Baltimore Ravens linebacker.

Christmas present for my brother, who's probably the world's second most passionate Ravens fan after Ray himself.

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_{8.5" x 11" inkjet paper. General's black & white charcoal pencils, mechanical graphite with kneaded eraser. November/December 2009.}

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Submitted on: December 26, 2009
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Critique by ~raul-duke-05 Dec 27, 2009, 12:38:19 AM

First off, AWESOME art! Excellent picture, and great contrast. It really looks like you can see his breath on this cold day. The grey and white background provides a good depth of field, and the texture in his skin is phenomenal. I only have a couple small suggestions to give this piece more impact. Make that dimple line that goes from the right edge of the nostril to the right edge of his mouth a little darker or more defined. That will make his expression look a little more intense. Also, adding a tiny bit of shine to his eye will help boost the intensity and give the piece more impact all around.
Overall, awesome art, and I still can't get over how well done that skin texture is. Awesome work!

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